HG Wells Sustaining Tension Essay, Research Paper
How H. G. Wells,
Builds and sustains tension In "The Red
Room". ........... The title "The Red Room"
immediately attracts the reader’s attention; it is symbolic but leaves
unanswered questions.. "What is the
red room.". "Why is it
red.". We associate red with fear
and danger.. Is this room
dangerous.. Overall, the title raises so
much curiosity that it has an overwhelming effect, wanting us to read on and
find answers to our questions............ The short story writer has to
attract the reader and keep their attention throughout.. In order for any story to work, tension has
to be built in the text, to keep it interesting.. In a novel, the writer has to structure and create tension
building it up and letting it drop and picking it up again.. Too much fast-paced action in a film kills
the essence of it and for the viewer, it can become almost funny to watch.. For a short story, however, it is able to
build tension and sustain it without completely dropping down to the original
level.. The best way of building tension
is to increase the tension then drop down slightly but not as low as at the
outset.. In adding more drama, little by
little, the story gains tension but the reader is also reminded of the
excitement as he is released from the drama from time to time............ In a short story, the reader will be
able to have a strong influence from the writer’s first and last lines.. This makes them very important and are well
thought out.. This is the first line:"’I can assure
you,’ said I, ‘that it will take a very tangible ghost to frighten me.’"From this first line, the reader can assume two pieces of
information.. Firstly that this story
involves a ghost, and secondly that the character is an educated and well-read
man. This peak of
interest increases the tension and stops the reader from putting the book
down.. Also, as it is a short story it
gets straight to the point............ The story in the first page
introduces four characters.. A young
man, an old man and his wife, and another old man.. We never know their names..
The young man is skeptical about the red room being haunted.. The three elder people believe that it is
haunted and dare not even go there..
Opposites build drama and drama builds tension.. This is the perfect example of how opposites
build tension.. Firstly, we have the young
against the old, which also symbolizes the inexperienced against the wise.. There is also the conflict between
’skeptics’ and the ‘wise’.. Although
they may be wise, the older people have not ever dared to go to the red
room.. They have become wise as they
have heard the stories about the room but none of them has ever had first hand
experience of the room............ Repetition is also a device used by
writers to build tension.. One of the
most obvious examples is on the first page."It’s your own choosing."The old man is
trying to warn the young man but at the same time he is leaving the ‘decision’
to him.. It is as if the three old
people are ridding themselves of their responsibility of the young man.. It is their duty, like guardians, to warn
the man of what they believe is to be his death. Another use of
repetition is on page two where the old woman keeps on repeating, "this
night of all nights.". We never
find out why that night is important but it gives the reader a ‘red herring’
question.. Although we are going to find
out when we read on; we want to have answers and this continues our interest
into – "why was that night important."........... The location is critical to the
short story.. The writer needs to give
his story a carefully considered and appropriate backdrop.. A short story works through its location,
characters, and setting in time and language..
These are the ingredients that tie it together and make the mixture
complete.. In this story, the location
is very important.. The story is set in
a castle.. A ghost story in a castle is
not a new idea and although it is a rather unoriginal location, it is very
appropriate.. The old people who inhabit
the place cannot use most of it to live in because they are afraid of the ‘red
room’.. This keeps them well away from
that section of the castle.. A castle is
such an appropriate location and here what we do not know is far more
frightening than what we do know.. A
castle is a perfect example of what we do not know!. It is full of rooms, corridors and stairs.. As the story continues, the young man
explores the castle on his journey to the red room.. On route to the red room, he comes across what looks like a
figure in front of him only to find it was an ornament of a Chinaman on a buhl
table.. Then as he ap
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